THE SEED OF SHOCK (1976)

- "The SEED of SHOCK" (as featured in 1977's PARADE OF GORE #1) Text: © 1976, Rick Grimes. Lettering & Logo: © 1976, Rick Taylor. Illustration: © 1976, Fred Greenberg.
GRIMES: "PARADE OF GORE: Its reputation may precede it, but any real copy, if ever, found in hand would soon deflate any mythic expectations.
Again, everyone did what they could on it. But, I always thought it was just MANTICORE #2 with black splats; that only the outside, (though there are nice contributions inside, too, in the general sense), fulfilled our initial vision of it. Not because mine is the back cover. I also had a text story I wrote, inside, usually rightfully ignored, (my response to an illo by Fred Greenburg that I loved. One he already had about, someplace); it 'belongs' in an sf fanzine of the day. Steve (Bissette) and probly Larry (Loc) and I were the ones first stirred up to have the thing, once Fred had generously offered to print it. He was never critical of any of us when, perhaps, he could have been. We all put a little money in on it, I think, to defray the costs for Fred. So, none of us were about to loom over anyone to do their part our way. I wouldn't've had the nerve.
I thought of the title, in that initial talk the few of us had with Fred when we thought it up. (I had at one time wanted to call a comic Zoo Parade which had already been used years before). No one knew this later. I remember them or us having art all over trying to get some page flow out of the thing. And wagging boxes of them to 'the city', (New York), the convention for the expected minor avoidance and dismay of anyone willing to touch it.
Glancing through it again today, it really isn't any worse than similar things, such early work. What it would've taken to be crazier enough to suit me then I wouldn't and didn't know. Guess, the covers seemed like false advertising. Not enough 'gore' inside. Too much leaning on fantasy pin ups! Had forgotten alot of what's in it, even (John) Totleben's fine centrespread and Larry's 'acid troll' (no doubt back from recent bloodshed) - both were pages they'd been working on anyway, 'for' class.
My back cover, (named after the partly visible label of a jelly jar), I believe I'd actually already done that summer before the second class came. Quieter. Not at my usual board. It had nothing to do with anything or anyone but putting the ugly headed, 'warning' thing on paper. All very purifying. Remember Joe (Kubert) saw it. And Ernie (Pasanen) and his girlfriend. It didn't even bother me like it might've once.
The sick demonic head with its cat whiskers and baline 'teeth' harks back to some really disturbing creature on a Marvel Monster magazine cover painting, possibly year or two before PARADE OF GORE or Kubert school in their monster boom of the mid seventies. I don't have the magazine anymore because it bothered me! This big hell beast with a really nasty, soul-snuffing leer. (See: Monsters Unleashed #10, February 1975. Art by Jose Antonio Domingo).
Always liked Bissette's GORE cover creature, chewing at its leg - worthy of any wire rack in a public restroom. Loved (Rick) Veitch's marching logo but I always wished they'd left the zipatone off. I saw it when he was working on it, inking it, I guess. It was much snappier that way.
My text story called "The Seed of Shock" (one-plus pages), with Fred's illo, (actually from '76), was inspired, if that's not overstating my result, by the picture's two overlapping aliens, the largest, more 'faded', seeming to interpenetrate the other being as it falls from a run. Still think it's a fine picture. One Fred contrived from two separate pieces, in printing. If I recall right.
Rick Taylor was good enough to do the lettering, uncredited; but mistakenly one of the small, note pages of my writing was copied back instead of front, or vice versa. The funny thing is, tho' it can be read understandably either way. May have improved it! Was about altering realities, too!
One more thing, to clarify on Bissette's intro of the "Elly" reprint. I asked him, then, to point out the demon's similarity to Clive Barker's sketch (in TABOO #1) not to emphasize my supposed originality, but that independently of each other, over a span of some years and no awareness of each other we both drew what looks to me to be the same demon. A slight tweak of Steve's wording then - probably needed because I wasn't quite clear myself.
I still have a stack of PARADE OF GORE, never bagged, their edges now burned by time and a continuing inability to magically change themselves into a better magazine. Don't lay out too much for one, kids!" -- Rick Grimes (December 22, 2008).
GRIMES: ""The Seed of Shock" was supposed to read: Where the old alien gets up to leave and it says 'the key / exhilarated' is where line broke wrong. Story actually is supposed to end where 'Skael' puts his hand to his face, like in the picture.
"The miscopied (which I was too slack then to double check ahead of time, let alone just do myself) version, as printed, tho' intelligible actually is less preferable to me as it leaves the impression that the other alien's death means nothing at all to Skael, that he is just continuing on to another world. Whereas its supposed to be a culminating failure - the death ever caused by his interpenetrating the other's reality.
"And, as printed, the so called ending is really the setting for where the alien is about to die.
"Clear as mud and about as important.
"Was better rereading it 'today' than thought it was. That cold do that good. (Steve) Bissette said at the time he didn't think I'd caught it as well as the way I had told it to him, and Fred (Greenburg), before ever writing it. But, then again, I didn't broadcast the error alot after it was printed. Don't even know if anyone ever realised it, or who I told. -- Rick Grimes (February 16th, 2009).
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